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Topic
Agree or disagree: People will stop
subscribing to printed newspapers in the
future.
I agree with the idea that people will stop
subscribing to printed newspapers in the
future. I have two opinions why I think so.
First of all, to print newspapers uses a lot of
papers. They are made by wood that is
important nature material. The kind of
nature things has limit to use, so we should
not use them too much. The plants also play
role in the keeping air clean. This is the
reason why I think it is bad for environment.
Secondly, the printed newspapers are too
big to carry. Thesedays we can get it online
and we cand read it all the time wherever
you are. For example on the train, in office,
in café and so on.
For these reasons, I think people will stop
subscribing printed newspapers.