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Write an essay on the given TOPIC.
Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer.
Structure: Introduction, main body, and conclusion
◆ Suggested length: 120-150 words
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Agree or disagree:
Movies and TV programs have more negative influence than positive on how young
people behave.
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Society
Entertainment
Culture

I don't think that movies
and TV
Programs
have more
negative influence than positive on
Young people behave. I
how
have two reasons. To begin
with, young people can learn
current society by watching on
TV news. TV has many news
programs, so they can think
social events from various perspectives
too. By doing so, wany
Young people will be interested
in modern society. In the
second reasons, they can know
other culture by watching foreign.
movie. Movies are made many
country such as U.S. and China.
It is written a lifestyle different
from Japan, so they can
learn culture foreign country.
Therefore, movies and TV have
many good points, so they should
watch more them.