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Should people trust information on the internet?
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I don't agree that people should truse information on the Internet.
This essay will explain the two main reasons for my opinion
Th Terms of News and online shopping
The first reason is that we cante lonow that the news 75
correct. Although we are able to obtain a variery of
Information, the news may have a hias. A tending
may suffer to us such as
There fore, I found that
A tending information
the big earthquake in Kumamoto.
don't have to rely to everything.
we
For example, when
The second reason is the online shopping is likely to send
we buy the dress through internet,
goods which we down requine.
we can't know whom this dress sell by. If it were not for
buying clothing ac online store, it could not have such a opportunity
to purchaseing different clothing.
For these reasons, I don't believe people ought not to trust information.
on the Internet.