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Q Write
about
a person
who helped
you
and explain what you learned from that experience.
(00~1507.
I was helped by my
junior high school
band contest. I was.
3.0
(o
20
Date
when you were in trouble,
I was especially worried about whether
the thing what help people to become happy.
brass band club teacher when I was
I would be able to play well or not at contest.
I often very nervous and make mistakes when I
think it is important or when I do something in front.
of many people. I talked my brass band club teacher it
and she said that playing well is important, but enjoy.
playing and make people to be happy is more
Ao
90
important than try to play well because music is
L
too much. and I could
student and worried about brass
40
he
When I heard it, I become not to think about plaing well
F...
20
succes the contest..
460
because
30.
From this experience, I learned about well skill is not most
important and
should think about the true purpose.
of
things.. (1487)
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