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コミュニケーション英語ⅡI 表現課題 ⑤
1.物語を作ってください。 タイトルもつけましょう。 ただし、教科書 p129 の 1 2 の 10 個の文の中から2
文、3の指示に従って作った英文1文の計3文は必ず含めてつくること。 使った3文については､赤で下線
を引いておくこと。 分量は250語以上書いてください。 語数は自分で数えてタイトルの行に書いてください。
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Once upon a time, there was a little girl named Mary
She lived with her sick mother. The doctor wanted to Cure
her mother's illness, but the problem is that he didn't know
how to cure her. Then Mary thought that she might find out
Something if she meet to a knowledgeable old man in town, so she is
The old man said, "My wife had the same ?
disease. But the medicine I got cured her." He had a
provid expression. Mary asked him where he could get the medicine. 23
to the man.
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It's a scary witch's house," he said. Mary was scared, but 104
decided to go to the witch's house for her mother. After that, 116
She
got
a map and walked to the witch's house.
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After walking for a while, it got darker and darker, and 139
it was very spooky. Mary was frightened but kept walking. 129.
It was then. She found the witch's house!
She was so
happy that she opened the door without knocking.
There was a witch there, and she said You are a bad girl
to come into my house without knocking". The witch transformed
her into a toad. She cried because she had not expected
the witch was so Terrifying. Still crying, she insisted to the
witch that she desperately wanted the medicine. The wich was
mored by Mary's impassioned appeal. And the witch said
of
If you give me ten years your life, I'll give you the medicine?
She accepted the offer. The witch restored her original form.
and extracted the medicine from the flowers. Then she thanked
the witch and returned home safely. Mary's mother was cared
by the medicine and lived happily with Mary. Later that day.
and she asked
Mary went to thank the knowledgeable old man
him how to convinced the witch to give the medicine.
He said,
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I told the witch that I would give you the life
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of the next person who visited you for 10 years."
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