Question

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英作文を書いたので間違っているところがないか添削して頂きたいです。よろしくお願いします。

Q There is
classes
What
an opinion that high school music and art
as important as other subjects.
are
not
意見と理由2つ
do you think?
I think
That music and art classes are important.
I have two reasons for this.
First, music and art
music
Sometimes give students an
opportunity to enjoy school life through events life
Concerts or school festivals.
Second, it is said that learning
learning them
our brains.
them is good
effect
on