Question

cocona

英検準2級のライティングの添削をお願いします。
Q. Do you think parents should take their children to museums?
A. I think parents should take their children to museums.
　 I have two reasons.
　First, children can do a lot of experience. For example, they can learn animals,food,and history.
　Second, museum is very fun. I went to there to feel interesting when I was six.
　So, parents should go to museums with their children.

(改行は見やすいようにしたつもりなのであまり気にしないでください。語数は50語〜60語で指定されており、55語です)

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