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Q Do you think parents should Take their childen
To maseums?
I think they shonld take therir chitderen to mnusenns
I have Tero reasons.
日st, 901ng TO museums is
children. They will be in perested in a (ot _of thinge,
Second, museums have many interesting Things.
So children coill enjoy there
There fope
will be betfer experierce fo go to museums
for children
infor matire. for
,, miseons are rery wwder ful place

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Children will enjoy them.
Therefore, museums are a wonderful place.
It is a good experience for children to go to museums (and I think their parents should encourage them to have such an experience).

でどうでしょうか。
他動詞enjoyの使い方，単数名詞句の冠詞，比較対象不明の比較級，to不定詞の意味上の主語の位置などについて直しました。

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