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@uestion.
Do you think smartphon es are necessory
for small chidren?
My answer
1 donit think s martphones are necessary
for small children、
1Ihave two reasons
First, I think small child ren should
move and play.
Second. if they look at the smartphones
for a long time, they may not ive
without the smartjhones,
Because of that. they may stop 90 out 、
Sowe shouldn't give them' smortphones

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