Question

ゲストはな

どなたか英作文の添削お願いします🙇‍♀️

ラケット
の父に買ってもらった一元テニス選寺だった-おしえてもらっに
それを使っ広最初の試金す勝っことがてきた!
Chap.3 Writing - 51
5 Please introduce yòurself ānd tell us about something that is important to you. Please tell
us why it is important to you. You should write about 50 words. You must write in English.
Ima member of Tewmis club.
My important 1hing is the vacket.because
He was a Tennis player Too、 He tought wme how to play Teuuis人
In addition, I was able To win The "first Tennis march wiTh it、
my father bought it for lme、