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Grade Pre-1
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English Composition
Write an essay on the given TOPIC.
Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer.
Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion
Suggested length: 120-150 words
Write your essay in the space provided on Side B of your answer sheet.
Any writing outside the space will not be graded.
TOPIC
Agree or disagree: Big companies have a positive effect on society
POINTS
The economy
The environment
Work-life balance
lagree with this opinion that big companies have a positive effect on society.
Thave two reasons. 18
First, big company's products give us safety and relieve. Big companies can produce a
lot of products with little money, so customers always can get same products.
Also, big companies study products very much, so they can sell cheap and high quality
products. And big company's products have a kind of brand that is safety and nice
products. 58
Second, big companies have a great support system for workers. Big companies have a
lot of workers such as raising child or enjoying hobby.
Workers can keep their work life balance in big companies. 34
For these reasons, I agree with this opinion that big companies have a positive effect on
society. 17
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