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次の文は、自分の部活や習い事を英語で発表するのですが、英語が合っているかわからないので教えて貰いたいです。
なるべく中3までの文法を使いたいです。
二枚目はお手本です。
なるべく朝まででお願いします。

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Kaito の場合
I'm Kaito.
Today I'm going to talk about my club activities. As you know, I'ma.
Hello, everyone.
member of the soccer team. I've beena starter since last spring. I've been practicing very hard to
improve my corner kicks. T had some hard times, but my teammates helped me get over them. I'm
sure they've made me stronger. We're going to play in the national tournament next month. Those
vill be our last games in junior high. We'll do our best, so please come and support us! Thank you
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Answer 1

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ぅ ぃ

もとの日本語の文を見せてください🤲🏻´-
日本語と照らし合わせた方が誤りを探しやすいです👀💭

あと𝗜 𝗵𝗮𝘃𝗲 𝗯𝗲𝗲𝗻 ~のところの文についてなんですが、
𝗶𝗺𝗽𝗿𝗼𝘃𝗲 𝗺𝘆 のあとの単語は何ですか❔
線に重なっていてちょっと見にくかったので…

お

すみません。元の日本語の文はありません。
improve my technique です