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ALTの先生に英作文を添削していただいたのですが横のピンクの矢印はどう言う意味で書き込まれているのでしょうか??ちなみにちょこちょこ鉛筆で書き込んであるのは先生の添削跡です。

A difficult situation when you had to give an excuse
1. Your essay should be 100 - 120 words.
2. Check this point:
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Plan for Outline
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Introduction what happened
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homeuork and late for school
Body 1… WHether it was your fault, what you thouaht about the situation
Body 2 What you said, whether it was,the truth
relly
Conclusion . Finally what happened, what you thought about your excuse or what you learned from this.
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