Question

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Discuss with your group on how you make the paragraph  right and free from errors. In revising the paragraph, you have to check the  3 golden agrements in writing: subject- verb agreement, parallellism and pronoun- antecedent agreement. Discussion will be ONLY made in the comment section; thus, you are not allowed to talk on other social media app. 
 
Unedited paragraph: 
 
(1) Kathy has always liked dollhouses, and got an idea for a business from their hobby. (2) Now she and his brothers makes dollhouses for sale. (3) Neither she nor do her brothers give all of her time to the business. (4) Still, the team make all thier spending money from their sales. (5) Kathy has ordered and assembles the pieces. (6) He chooses the plywood, she cuts it to scale, and assembling the pieces. (7) Her younger brother, Max, paints the houses inside and out, giving it details like doors, the windows, and  its shutters. (8) While Murray and Max do his jobs, Kathy buys miniature furniture. (9) Then she sews curtains, have rugs, the tablecloths, and bedspreads to make each house special. (10) From October until mid-December, the crew take turns selling its products at craft sales.