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Do you play sot
think it is important er children te
I think thet it is important tor chilaren o poy sports.
I
hove two
reasons
First, for thenm,it is 900d for their healtん、 Alsos
it prevents abesity.
Second, they will notice it is' impor tant to
ith colleaguels. Then they will 9et along with each other.
Therefore, children shoud ploy sports.
Cooperate
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