英作文の添削をお願いします！！ 眠い中書いたので字が汚くて申し訳ないです。

I don't think people's salaries shall be based on their job pertamance. I have two reasurs. In the first place, everyone have different skills. Many people don't always work well, so It is no equal. In the second place, if it be be hused on their age, itt's can be said to be equal. Mart geople get More a family on they get older, so they need money. Therefore, I think it is bad for people to have their salaries besed on their job performance.

矢印の変形が分からないので過程を教えて頂きたいです🙇🏻‍♀️

92 91 Skill 底を統一する ! 底が2種類以上あるときは,底の変換公式を用いて底を統一する。 > Check (1) 4log(x-1)>log(x-2)-log/ (x+2)①の解は, (2)関数 f(x) = 210g(x+2)+3log/ (-x+4) は x = オカ をとる。 14. log₂ (x-1) log24 解答 (1) 真数は正であるから, x-1>0かつx-2 > 0 かつx+2>0 すなわち, x2…..... ② ① を変形すると ->log2(x-2)- 2log2 (x-1)> log₂ (x-2)+log₂ (x+2) logz(x-1)>log2(x-2)(x+2) 底2は1より大きいから, (x-1)^>(x−2)(x+2) f(x)=2.. logs(x+2) logs (-x+4) +3・ 1 log: 27 これと②よりx< (2) 真数は正であるから, x+2> 0 かつ - x+4> 0 すなわち, -2 <x<4 ...... 3 Alhol loga ア log2(x+2)底を2に統一した。 1 log2 2 <x< 9 =-logs(x+2)-logs(-x+4) =-logs(x+2)(−x+4) =-log(-x+2x+8) ウ I のとき最小値 イ ・底と1との大小を確認 底を3に統一した。 Skill 例 常 例 の Che p= して小 信用文 =x2+2x+8=-(x-1)' +9 は③において x=1のとき最大値9 をとるから, このとき f(x) は最小となり、最小値は-log39=2である。 深める 底を統一する際は,式に現れるすべての底を α” (nは整数)の形に表せるようなαを底に選ぶと よい。

英検の英作文添削をお願いします。 1行5語に合わせたり、削ったりしているので、段落や空間等は気にせずに添削をして頂きたいです。

I don't think scare people's salaries should be based on their job performance. I have two reasons. In the first place, It should be changed from their performance to age. As they get older, many people will have their family, so they need a lot. of money. If their salavies base on age, they can live in peace. In the Second place, some people don't have the skills. For example, people who have disability may not have enough skills. If their salaries be based on r their age, they can't get enough money. Last of all I think people's salaries had better be based on their age. It has a lot of benefit than being based on their job performance. Mary people can live in peace

personalが心の通ったと訳されていて In the end it was Kyle's personal communication skills and sincerity that allowed him to achieve his dream. 納得でき... 続きを読む

「私は4月からコンピュータの技術を学ぶ」を、I'm going to study computer skills from April.にしたらバツでした。 動詞にstudyを使ったからダメで、learnにしなければいけないということですか？ もしそうだったら、その理由を教... 続きを読む

Q2の問題を教えてください 下線部と同じ意味になるように適切に語句をいれる問題で、どう考えたら良いですか

(3) Q2 Fill in the blanks with the most appropriate words so that it has the same meaning as the underlined text in the third paragraph. and ( 1 ) ( 2 ) made it obligatory to take the TOEIC test, ( 3 ) D ( (8pts

1、2枚目の7に入る並び替えでは SO S V という形ですが、 3枚目はSO V S の倒置になっています 倒置の時とそうじゃない時の見分け方を教えてください 実際、7の並び替えをする時にSVにするかＶＳにするか迷いました。

目標解答時間 10 31 社会 ディズニーの大きな決断 (1) 分 On April 4, 2003, Glen Keane, one of Walt Disney's most (1)respected animators, called for a meeting to (2)discuss (3)the war breaking out at the studio. Disney's animators had settled into two opposing camps: those who were skilled in computer animation and those who (4)refused to give up their pencils. Keane, a 31-year veteran who created the beast for "Beauty and the Beast" and Ariel for "The after a series of experiments to see whether Little Mermaid," (5)was a Disney traditionalist. (6) But S he could create a computer-animated ballerina, his opposition softened ( 7 )of both art forms, calling his seminar "The Best of Both Worlds." (注) veteran 「ベテラン」 traditionalist Ṁи pres and co「巷不白亜 FS 15 words) ballerina 「バレリーナ｣ 31 問 (G

ポイントを読み取ろうと内容を確認しようの それぞれの回答があっているかの確認をお願いします 間違っている場合は回答を教えてください

① Sesame Street also has episodes about people with disabilities. (セサミストリートには障害者に関するエピソードもあります。) ② For example, a character named Siven appears in the Israeli version. (たとえば、イスラエル版にはシバンという名前のキャラクターが登場します。) ③ Sivan is a girl who wres a wheelchair. (シバンは車椅子を使う女の子です。) She sometimes has her wheelchair pushed by her friends. (彼女は時々、友達に車椅子を押してもらうことがあります。) ⑤ At other times, she offers a hand to others as much as she can. 時には、彼女はできる限り他の人に手を差し伸べます。) ⑥ Sesame Street cha llenges traditional gencer roles as well. (セサミストリートは伝統的な性別役割にも挑戦します。) ⑦ The Indian version has some episodes where male characters cook voluntarily. (インド版では男性キャラクターが自主的に料理をするエピソードがいくつかあります) ⑧ In other episodes, female characters play soccer skillfully or do math. well. (他のエピソードでは、女性キャラクターが上手いサッカーをしたり、数字を上手にやったりします。) @ Through episodes like these, children understand how to get along with people with various clisabilities, (このようなエピソードを通して、子どもたちはさまざまな障害を持つ人々とどのように付き合っていくかを理解します。) ⑩ They also have a chance to reconsider gender stereotypes in society. また、社会におけるジェンダーの固定観念を考え直す機会にもなります。)

文法的なミスを指摘してください。 文自体は変えたくないので文法ミスを箇条書きして頂けるとありがたいですm(_ _)m 読みにくい英作ですみません。

14:54 ◆ フォルダ all 72 Japanese students, most of them must start job hunting when they become juniors, should experience working part time while their first and second years. By working, they can meet people from various background, learn the kinds of skills they can't learn in classrooms, and note the difficulty and significance to be a worker in society. Such experiences, along with their studies, will help them decide what kind of occupation seek after graduation. Japanese college students should go to abroad and talk with foreigners in English. It will help them improve their ability to speak English. Recently, English is becoming more and more important, and they may have to use English in their works after graduation. Almost college students in Japan cannot speak English even after having studied it for a long time. That's because they should go to foreign countries and practice speaking English. ||

文法的なミスがないか確認していただきたいです！！

Writing I'I couldn't give my full strength. There are two things that I can do things for improve my writing skill. First, getting used to write my opinion in English. I will write my opinions about one theme every week. Also, I'll ask my teacher to check the opinion. Second, building up my vocabulary. I study hard especially synonym. I didn't mean to use some word many times. Therefore I want to rephrase. In addition, I want to understand nuance of English. Then I'll tell audience my opinion clearly. I took care t