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3 あなたの中学校に,オーストラリアの姉妹校の生徒からメールが届きました。 そのメールを に英語を書いて返 読んで、次の 〔条件〕 に合うよう, くあなたのメール内の 事を完成させなさい。 [条件] ① 書き出しは I recommend を用いることとし, あなたがすすめる授業 (class) を 続けて書きなさい。 なお, 授業は 〔語群〕 から選んで書いてもよい。 ② なぜその授業をすすめるのかという理由も書くこと。 ③ まとまりのある5文程度の英語で書くこと。 なお、書き出しの文は1文と数え る。 <姉妹校の生徒からのメール> Hi! We are going to visit your school next month! We want to join some classes at your school during our stay. Many of us are interested in Japanese culture, so we want to have some experiences in the classes. Will you recommend one of your classes to us? James あなたのメール> Hi James! I'm glad to hear that you will come to our school! I recommend I hope you'll like the class. I am waiting for your email. 〔語群] 国語 = Japanese 英語 English 社会= social studies 音楽 = music 数学 = math 理科= science 美術 = art 体育 = P.E. 技術・家庭 = technology and home economics 道徳= moral education 総合的な学習の時間=the period for integrated studies 学級活動 = homeroom activities es q

promisingの具体的な内容が下のオレンジの部分となっているのですが、上の緑の部分がだめな理由をどなたか教えてください。

20 15 Rothblatt believes that within twenty years, "mind clones*" will be humanity's biggest invention. (2) The concept of cloning human brains and placing them inside robotic bodies has been described in numerous science fiction works. However, Google director Ray Kurzweil believes that our bodies may be replaced by machines 第2段落 P P C ロスプラットは「頭脳 クローン」が人類最大 の発明になると信じて いる。 グーグル社の 人々の身体はやがて様 重役カーツワイルも、 械に置き換わり、デジ タル的に不死身となる。 人間が現れると信じて いる。 彼は著書の中 で、超知的な「トラン スヒューマン」が様々 な問題を解決すると同 時に、通常の人間をご within ninety years and that some people will become digitally immortal*. His 1999 book The Age of Spiritual Machines: When Computers Exceed Human Intelligence describes one possible future in which the boundaries between biological human intelligence and digital artificial intelligence blur*. Kurzweil mentions a possible 流の市民だと見なす future that seems both (3) promising and terrifying. If super intelligent transhumans* become hundreds of times smarter, many problems such as hunger, war, and pollution 【前途有望な未来像】 could be solved. However, (4)there is no guarantee that such computer-based 【恐ろしい未来像①】 ↑ intelligence would act “fairly” by ordinary human standards. According to Kurzweil, during the late 21st century humans who become part of super-intelligent AIsystems* 【恐ろしい未来像②】 来像を描いている。 might start to regard ordinary humans as second-class citizens. At some point, 25 ordinary people simply will not be able to keep up with the super-intelligent 【恐ろしい未来像③】 ↑ "transhumans." If you had the choice and could afford it, would you upload your own consciousness onto a computer? Would you like to purchase a robotic version brofis of yourself?

この文章のマーカーの部分でhelpの後の文がrelax patients.の形になるのはなぜですか？

Many children wanted to go to the surgery room with Bailey. They were scared of surgery. However, thanks to Bailey, they were able to face their operations with courage. After the surgery, they and their families could feel relaxed by touching Bailey. Morita wanted them to have a big smile, even after an operation. The scientific effects of facility dogs are not yet clear, but dogs are thought to help relax patients. According to a study in Japan, when a dog and its owner looked at each other, oxytocin was released in the human's body. It is a hormone that helps reduce pain and anxiety.

自由英作文の添削をどなたかにして頂きたいです！🙇🏻‍♀️ 〈問題〉 科学的なものの見方を理解しておくことは、きっとこれからの人生に大いに役立ちます。 〈私の回答〉 It should be very helpful for your future life to know... 続きを読む

(2) Understanding the scientific viewpoint will surely help you considerably in the future. 【別解】 If you understand the scientific point of view, it is sure to be very helpful for your future. 解説 間違えた原因やどうすれば解けたか 振り返り Check も参考に考えながら読もう!

自由英作文の添削をどなたかにして頂きたいです！🙇🏻‍♀️ 〈問題〉 自分の意見をはっきりと言う習慣を身につけておけば、今後きっと助けになる。 〈私の回答〉 It should be helpful for your future to get used to expres... 続きを読む

3 4 118 Some scientific theories are changed as time passes. 19 Learning to express your opinion clearly will surely help you in the future. ⑲20 Until recently, human beings often saw things from a religious viewpoint rather than from a scientific one. (1) When we look at our everyday lives, a lot of accepted ideas[theories], or what we call

(1)から(5)の問題を間違えて消しってしまったので答えが分かりません😭 ほんとにめんどくさいんですけど、1から5までの答えの線を書いてくれる方お願いします🙏💦

□(1) Scie 「光」作図プリント② (光の反射) 「像」は鏡に対して線対称の位置にできる。だからまずそこに点をとるねん! ほんで、①でとった点と目を結ぶやろ? 目に向かって矢印描くねんぞ! 鏡の向こうの世界は点線がいいなー) ②の線と鏡の交点が反射した点だな。だからその交点と物体を線で結べば完成~ 0 物体 (5) 鏡の前に立っている人のA点とB点が 映って見える位置と, A点とB点から出て 目に届く光の道すじをかきなさい。 物体 K B

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英語 About seven years ago I started learning how to paint as a hobby: I was pretty terrible. Everything looked flat, I did not have the right proportions, and my colors were totally off. My friends and colleagues suggested that I stop wasting my time (a ) something I wasn't good at. "Focus on your day job," they said. I kept at it practicing, taking classes, finding the right teachers who could teach and challenge me Over five years, painting started to become intuitive", and surprisingly, I am now considered "good." Today, the same friends say I was born with this talent. "You're in the wrong profession," one said recently. The same thing happened when I started piano and singing lessons a couple of years ago. Comments shifted from. "Stop wasting your time and focus on what you know," to "You've got a musical talent." (A These comments originate from long-held beliefs that growth is largely not possible for adults. Even when there is evidence of learning, it can be caused by talent from birth, like the comments that I received suggested. Most scientific studies on adulthood focus on cognitive maintenance or decline, rather than growth. (b) that even scientists may think that development is severely limited in adulthood. The prevailing" mentality is represented by proverbs, such as "use it or lose it," or worse, "old dogs can't learn new tricks." A few recent studies, such as ones by Arne May and Denise Park, ( C ) suggest that learning new skills, such as juggling or photography, for even three months may strengthen brain functioning in adults. (B) I would take these studies one step further to argue that an important cause of cognitive

答えは2番なのですが他のがなぜダメで2番になるのかわかりません。教えてください🙇

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I was very ( ) of my poor pronunciation. の回答はconscious だったのですが、embarrassedが入らない理由は何でしょうか。（選択肢にあったので） どなたかお願いします🙇‍♀️

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9次の英文は,オーストラリアからの留学生トム (Tom)と由美(Yumi)が対話しているも のです。 これを読んで, 問いに答えなさい。 Tom Yumi : Thank you for A me around the school, Yumi. *My pleasure, Tom. This is our library. It's (1) the science room. It Tom Yumi Tom Yumi First, let's go to the second floor. B a lot of books. If you want to read some English books, you can find them. There are about 50 English books. You can also use the computer there. : OK. Where can we play sports? We have a big *gym on the first floor. We play sports there. Nice! Do you have a *cafeteria? Cafeteria? Tom : (2) We don't have a cafeteria in our school. Yumi We usually eat lunch in our *classroom. Tom : Can I eat lunch with my friends in other places? Yumi No, you have to eat school lunch in your classroom. Oh, that is your classroom, 2-1. It's on the second floor, too. When you want to see a teacher, you can visit the teachers' room. Look! It's on the same floor. And if you (to/talk/something/me/some/ with have), come to the third floor. (1) It's is on the third floor. Thank you, Yumi. Tom : I see. My class 3-2 the music room.