Question

かかかかえ

この原発に関する意見文を添削して欲しいです。よろしくお願いします🙇

Do you think nuclear power plants should be abolished in Japan?
日本語:
英語:
原発を推進していくべきだと考える。日本は政府も国民も
お金が不足しているので、発電効率がよく、なにより安い原発は、
もってこいだ。また、環境を破壊する確率も極めて低い。
No. I don't, I think. we should use nuclear power plants
Japan's government and people have not enough money. Nuclear
power is good efficient of genelate electricity and cheeper
aprada siemils
than other plants. Also, probabirity of destorying the enviroment
is extremely low.onim

Answer 1

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Mackarel

スペルミス 誤 → 正
genelate → generate
probabirity → probability
enviroment → environment

文法ミス 誤 → 正

--- and people have not enough money → and people don't have enough money

--- is good efficient of generate electricity → is efficient at generating electricity

No I don't と I think we should use nuclear power plants は全く同じことを指しているのでどちらか片方でいいです。
I think Japan should encourage the use of nuclear power plants とかでいいと思います。

Japan's government は The Japanese government と書いたほうがいいです。Both the government and the people of Japan でもOK

まるっきり書き直すとこんな感じですかね？

I think Japan should encourage the use of nuclear power plants. Both the government and the people of Japan are lacking money. Nuclear power is efficient at generating electricity and cost effective, making it an ideal way to provide power to households today. Moreover, it is an safe and clean generating method, unlikely to cause major effects to the locals and the surrounding environment.

かかかかえ

なるほど！ありがとうございます！