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Hi!
I want to tell you something. My dad and I went to a new stadium last Sunday.
It opened two months ago. We watched a rugby game between two university
teams there. My dad taught me some of the rules, too. It was my first time, so it
was very exciting. I will continue to watch rugby. Do you think more people will
watch this sport?
Your friend,
Alex

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I'm really interested in a new stadium! Where is as new stadium
And how
*many people can enter it? About your question, I think more people watch
rugby. Thanks to a new stadiam, they can watch it easily. before a
Stadium is build.
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