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QUESTION
Do you
think hospitals should be open on weekends?

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I think hospitals should be open on weekends.
many
I have two reasons. First, people is busy in Monday for Friday.
Because many people have to go school or work place. So it's useful if
hospitals open on weekends. Also, we cannot to go hospitals when
on weekends. I think
I think many
people became to happy if
we hart
hospitals open on weekends.