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yyy

英作文を書きました。添削をお願いします。
自分の自信がないところにマーカーを引いたので、そこを重点的に見ていただけると嬉しいです🙇‍♂️

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This chart shows the number of international students (in the U.S in 2019) by country
of origin. Obviously, Japanese students are not very interested in studying abroad, or in
this case in the U.S., compared with those from other East-Asian countries like China,
South Korea, or Taiwan, Many experts attribute this tendency to their being introvert
(A). Of course, this characteristic is not confined to Japanese youth, and there are
other reasons why they don't study abroad, apart from this characteristic. However, it is
undeniable that this is a big problem for this nation.
Country
Number of International Students in the U.S.
China
372,532
India
193,124
South Korea
49,809
Saudi Arabia
30,957
Canada
25,992
Vietnam
23,777
Taiwan
23,724
Japan
17,554
Brazil
16,671
Mexico
14,348
Nigeria
13,762
Nepal
12,730
Iran
11,451
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(1) Explain Japanese youth's introversion with an example other than studying abroad,
in about 40 words.
(2) Do you agree with the reason mentioned in this passage? Or do you think there is
another, more convincing reason why Japanese youth don't study abroad? Write your
opinion in about 60 words.
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(1) Japanese youth make friends on the Internet. It seems that
• they are introversion, so it is difficult for them to talk
NOT other people face to face. This action also accelerates
the introversion soll
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(2) Japanese people speak always Japanese so, we do not have
many opporunties to speak English in our daily lives.
Therefore, speaking English is a high hurdle for us.
Also, Japanese young people have no often confidence in
their English ability, and few peple go to study abroad.

Answer 1

✨ ベストアンサー ✨

うずら

出来るだけ意味を変えずに校正させていただきます！

(1)青い下線の部分
It seems that they are introverted, so it is difficult for them to talk to other people face to face.

(2)
Japanese people always speak Japanese, so we do not have many opportunities to speak English in our daily lives.
Therefore, speaking English is a high hurdle for us.
Additionally, Japanese young people often lack confidence in their English ability, and only a few choose to study abroad.

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yyy

ありがとうございます！