文字が判別できる範囲内で回答します。
1. … who live [in] near … → … who live near …
2. … don't go to the museum often → … don't go there often ※同じ文の前に the museum があるため、同じ表現を避ける
3. This is … the people [判別不能] can [go to it] → This is … the people [判別不能] can [visit there] ※同じ表現を避ける
4. every minutes → anytime:いつでも
参考にしてください。