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英作文の添削をして頂きたいです！
偏見に対しての意見文を書いています。

We humans have many kinds of bias.

It is difficult for us to discard our prejudices. I think so, too.

However,we should more importance on people’s personality than their looks.

People’s looks and their personality don't match.

Also,I was taught another thing by this movie.

It is “There isn't anything normal.”

We can’t help judging others by one’s own standard.

On the other hand,it is only natural that everyone is different.

We don’t need to care about what others think of me.

It is important for us to be ourselves all the time.

長くて申し訳ないです、お願いします🙏

英作文

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英作文の添削をして頂きたいです！
偏見に対しての意見文を書いています。

We humans have many kinds of bias.

It is difficult for us to discard our prejudices

I think so, too.
⬆️ちょっと口語的な感じがする、英検なのか学校の課題なのかで口語表現がどの程度許されるかは変わるけど、いわゆるessayならI agree with this idea とかの方がいいかも。
However,we should more importance on people’s personality than their looks.

People’s looks and their personality don't match.
⬆️いつもマッチしてる訳じゃないって方がしっくり来るかも？not always

Also,I was taught another thing by this movie.
⬆️the movieでいいかも、thisって言うなら後に映画名も欲しい、
It is “There isn't anything normal.”

We can’t help judging others by one’s own standard.

On the other hand,it is only natural that everyone is different.

We don’t need to care about what others think of me.

It is important for us to be ourselves all the time.

拙いアドバイスではありますが、参考になると嬉しいです。

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ご丁寧にありがとうございます😭😭