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Date
think it is good for people to use smartphones while studying?
artphones while studying.
First, when we don't understand things, we can search on the Internet.
Second, We can
learn lunguage
all
the world..
over
I think it is good for people to use
Q Do you
I think it is good for people to use
I have two
reasons.
For these
reasons,
smartphones while studying.
smar

Answer 1

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MOMOKA

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モナミ🥨

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Answer 2

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language だけ、惜しい

参考にどうぞ

Firstly,when we can’t understand the class’s contents,we can solve what we have difficulty understanding by using smartphones and searching on the Internet.

Secondly,smartphones can take place of something such as dictionary, textbook.We can study anywhere without paper study tools.

For these reasons,I’m sure that using electronic devices such as smartphones while studying have more merits than not utilizing them in studying.

モナミ🥨

添削ありがとうございます😊
Language スペル気をつけます。