Question

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請問這個自我介紹有什麼語病嗎，麻煩各位幫我看一下謝謝🙏

My name is 名字. I’m from Taiwan. I am a student of Sanmin High School. My hobbies are playing the piano ,listening to music, cooking and watching movies. I am a curious person, when I see cool things, I want to try and learn about them. Thank you for your listening.

英文 自我介紹

Answer 1

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My name is 名字 and I am from Taiwan. I am currently a student at Sanmin High School. My hobbies include playing the piano, listening to music, cooking, and watching movies. I am naturally curious and always eager to try and learn new things, especially when they are interesting or cool. Thank you for taking the time to listen to me.
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謝謝！

Answer 2

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. When I see cool things,
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