Question

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TOPIC
Recently, solar power has been used in several places as an alternative source of energy.
Do you think that more people will use solar panels in the future?
POINTS
Cost
Weather
The environment

I do not think
in the future.
that
Source
solar panels users will increase.
I have two
up solar panels, they need
because they
they can
can
Save
a lot of money
wasteful.
use these money to buy a new car.
Second, it will not
continue sunny days, they are not
able to
sun lights and get a profit. Recently, they
have been many rainy days in Japan. That is why I
do not
believe that solar power
more people than
of energy.
it will not continue
reasons
First, if they set
I feel
use

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