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GTECのwriting問題です！
画像2枚目が私の解答なのですが、どのように訂正したら良いのか教えて頂きたいです🙇‍♀️

私は2つ目の部屋の優先事項？として日が入る部屋と書きたかったのですが、どのように書くことが出来ますか？

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Dear Yoshimi,
William
Yoshimi
Kind regards,
William
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RE: Moving dormitory
I'm William Sellers, in charge of administration at Mountain
Pine College.
I understand that you want to move to a different
dormitory.
First of all, could you please explain why you don't like your
current dormitory?
Also, apart from that, what are your priorities when looking
for a new dormitory?
I'm sorry for the trouble, but your answers will be a great
help when finding a suitable dormitory for you.
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Dear William,
Yoshimi
Best regards,
Yoshimi
William
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RE:RE: Moving dormitory
First answer come about becauce of people's loud
voice and motorcycle's noisy sound outside at night.
I'm looking for a room that have windows and let in
sun into the room.It is my priority.
I'm sorry for the trouble, but thank you for your
support.
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かれています。 スペリングや時制、単複などの誤りがな
いかもう一度見直しましょう。
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Answer 1

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taka

The reason I don't like my current dormitory is that at night I often hear people talking aloud and also some motorcycles making a lot of noise.
I'm looking for a dormitory that has windows to let sunshine into the room.
I'm sorry for the trouble but thank you for your support.

参考にしてください。

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ありがとうございます!!

taka

My pleasure!😊