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予想問題 No.5
Write an essay on the given TOPIC.
●Use Two of the Pointsbelow to support
your answWer.
Structure: Introduction, main body, and
conclusion
Suggested length: 120-150 words
【TOPIC)
Is enough being done to deal with the
shortage of doctors in Japan?
【POINTS)
School
Robots
Number
Cost

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In my opAion
f, docors n Japan.
obots
Not all people
ehouyh 1 being done to deal with the shatese
エI dot thak 0 f0r reasons
Such_ as
S and mbot
eholl n medical sohas and be come
schoo
mongy.
can
doctors lecause け heeds
a ot. of Money to study at medical
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That techolegy 15 deelaprg there adayo leads to
Poblem we face .doy
moje Dkely to l0se their Joks. lc So, people donp nant to
be doctors.
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thati: doctors are
The problene 1s
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In_tetms of school cost and 1obot
to
A
dore
I dout thk tha
cope with the shortage of doctors
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