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TOPIC
Some people say that people will stop using cash in the m
future. Do you agree with this opinion?
現金とその代わりの方
法のメリット·デメリナ
トを比較しよう。
POINTS
● Security ● Convenience ●Hahit

Date
No.
I
agree
this
opinion that peeple will sTop using cash
I have Iwo reasons why I think so.
jn the near future.
To. begin withif they usei the credic card, they can use it comforlably.
For instance, uhen ther (ose their cash , they cant get them again.
In.conTrast, y onyone,
sent Ta , bringing cash s bad to
busy
Cash from the case, they wasTe time,
this epinion.
the credil card will picked up
police officers In addition
They buy lunch in sTores, bul when Ther Pat out
and
mene
That is whr Iagree
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