Question

みつやさいだー

I think we should do more for climate change.That's because if climate change continues, we may not able to live in earth when we grow up. Also, climate change causes natural disasters. Heavy rain caused flooding in Japan again this year. So, in order to prevent such climate change,I want to do what I can. for example, we not waste resources, we recycle many things. I want to do many things to stop climate change.
この英作文でおかしなところや、間違っているところはありますか？教えて下さると嬉しいです🙇‍♀️

英作文

Answer 1

Xx_Saskia_xX

気付いたところです。

That's because❌
This is because ⭕

we may not able to live❌
be 動詞が抜けてます

live in earth❌
live on earth⭕

climate change,I❌ I の前にスペース
climate change, I ⭕

for example, ❌ 文頭の f は大文字

we not waste resources, we recycle many things.❌
we should recycle many things instead of wasting resources. と書いた方が良いです

わかりにくいところがあれば、聞いて下さい。説明します。

みつやさいだー

ありがとうございます！🙇⤵︎ ︎