Question

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英語で日記を書きました！
訂正やアドバイスお願いします🙇‍♀️

Friday . September 24 th. Sunry
ployed volley ball with bucdty of volley ball ream
都活の仲間とAいぶりにバレーをした。1ong tine
Sunny
Long
time
Ve were fun to.take pictures a lot.
たくさん写真をとって楽しんてだ
I want to everyone ta Stay all the time
ず、一っとみんなといたいな。

Answer 1

𝙢𝙚𝙢𝙚 🥀𓈒𓂃

最後の文は、
I want to stay with everyone...
か、
I want everyone to say with me...
がいいと思います！

ドラ吉チョンネル登録おねごいしもす！犬と勉強

I played volleyball with my buddies of my volleyball team after a long time.
We took a lot of pictures. It was fun for us.
I want everyone to get along with me now and forever.

ドラ吉チョンネル登録おねごいしもす！犬と勉強

Making diary in English is good try. Keep on doing. I reccomend you an app Hi!Native. It must help you a lot. Good luck!