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イ体日るの十であたかりサさにととその理由0~)
I lke
Fist, I can tnd hewthinge.
Secendi I think that studying 1s interesn
study
7 have two
reasons,
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My tavorite port is lasket ball becaua ANYCNE
C00lax it.
I want eveyone to
play Lecteb
T tcuera.te egi.l
Tuc wantueuee
ななはどれ今界か及を好きですか、 11大イへ5大)
I ike summer best
Summer
Also. I can. eyjoy 10ting pletures he covse
very hot. 501 Con go to The 21.
ner.sk
Cong waittok summer
iS
nice
ブMmmer sky:漫の壁
Can4 wait tor/to w :ルが情る差い厚く~1た.
Pens are importart dor me. because it peCdte
Studying 1s ieportant Hor me
Can4 study Rthectna pen.
SoI love pons.
withont ~
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| hke Hikkaido best because othere RCOd A
keautibheete.Nature mats me raax.
is important. for me
Studying made me tired. o. I heed fo。
relar.
e rear fo Squdy
①イントは求い限かっでいるー→け表しル感がわる
→ there is a beauritul natue there、
くthere is Cue] ~ t
Thereieは"e2にはい感索
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