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I, disoglee with the opmion that the numper of. compallen
that alow threr employee+' to wear casmal clother jeans or
T sさ all ncreae m the tatare.
I have tho reasons. 19
la First,
they doit not have Hime ta choose the thcoclothesms every
day
most people are buy with the ir nork.0
there ate busihera/tures in each Compony.
Second
There fare
For there reason
clothes will het be e commn.
.
s,小he emp loyees who neat casual
り
, people sonld project tiadipenal caltares
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TOPIC
Today, some companies allow their employees to wear
casual clothes like jeans or T-shirts. Do you think the
number of such companies will increase in the future?
POINTS
Business culture
* Comfort
Fashion