Question

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求解 找不出其他的的三個錯誤在哪裡😭

Practice 7 Editing for Errors
There are seven errors in this paragraph. They are in word forms (1), articles (3), sentence fragments (1),
comma splices (1), and subject-verb agreement (1). Mark these errors and write corrections.

In the conclusion, teachers should not use corporal punishment because it is ineffective in disciplining
students and may have long-term negative effects on students. Moreover, teachers should not forget that
love and understanding must be part of any kind of discipline. Discipline and love is not opposites,
punishment must involve letting the children know that what they do is wrong and why punishment is
necessary. Teachers should not just beat student with the hopeful that he will understand. It is important to
maintain discipline without inflicting physical pain on students. Therefore, teachers should use effective
kinds
alternatives
and more humane alternative. In order to bring about permanent behavioral changes.

英文

Answer 1

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你找得有些是正確的唷...

A. articles 冠詞錯誤 (3)
1. in "X" conclusion
2. Teachers should not just beat "a" student
3. Therefore, teachers should use "an" effective...

B. subject verb agreement 主動詞一致(1)
Discipline and love "are" ...

C. word form 字的型態(1)
beat a student with the "hope" that he will understand.

D. sentence fragment 不完整的句子(1)
and more humane alternative "x" in order to bring about....

E. comma splices 僅用逗號連接兩個獨立句子(1)
Discipline and love are not opposites"." Punishment must involve letting....

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