Question

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英検２級の英作文の添削やアドバイスをお願いします。

(1)
●POINTS は理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。ただし、こ
●以下の TOPICについて, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。
れら以外の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。
●語数の目安は80語~ 100語です。
TOPIC
In recent years, many people make good use of E-books. Do
you think E-books are better than paper books?
POINTS
Convenience
●Environment
●Space

I think that E-books
we
710
paper books. I have two reason
my
opinion.
First of all, E-books is
we
Also we
can look for
740
are interested in.
can read
+
Second of all,
750
paper books need
read books whenever
are
a
7
E-books
better than
convenience.
look for books
E books don't use space
have to
don't use
a lot of space but
T
even
if
770
to support
730
we read.
which
we buy
We don't have
and desk for puting books.
use
lot of books. Also,
space.
books boxes

英検２級 英作文

Answer 1

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◎一つ目の理由の部分
E-books is convenience →E-books are convenient
we can read books wheneverのbooksは、E-books
にする
we can look for books which…
→we can easily(/quickly) look for E-books which…

◎二つ目の理由の部分
books boxes and desk →shelves
for puting books→ for putting (tを二つ重ねる) books

なほ

ありがとうございます！！

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(追加です)
I have two reason → I have two reasons
英作文の最後に、If we want to read E-books, all we have to do is use a tablet.を入れると良い気がします。(自信はないですが💦)

なほ

とても勉強になりました。
ありがとうございます。

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お役に立てて良かったです
英検の勉強がんばってください💪