」 生か Do you think smoking honld be banned2" と 3
は 生全ボッ 、 ごのEE拓PC
ン 会導中の宇記(ア) 一(②) に最る適当な芋 (所) を補え: ただし・ 1ユ医と
限らない。 なお, 2か所の(ア)6 は同じものが入る
tnink that smoking should be banned. | have two reaSoniSx First smoke is
pad not only for those who smoke but also fo hose around Whem. Im paricular
widren who parerts ofen smoke are in danger。 Second, Clgereties 8 becoming
more expensive. However. some brands of cigarettes are twice_aS expensive_ 8
jney were 10 years ago.Smoking regulary spends a lot Fortnese reasons | NTK
smoking should be prohibited.
Teacher : Eeehlenti Your content is very dlear。 But grammatical
、 you need to
rect three points。 Look at the underlined parts。In the 4th
mcst ue“( ア )*inweadorwho" WeneversnTTdogiscute hiko no生還
entence, You
dog""( ア ) parents" is coret. The context of the 5th and 6th sentences
js almost the same so you cannot use "However" Compared to the Sth
sentence.the 6th sentence explains in more detail so sou should use*( イ )
When you use the verb "spend" the subject is a person。The subject of the 7th
sentence, Smoking regularly" is not a person, so you should use*( ウ )"
instead of "spends."
Student : Thank you for your corrections。 TII rewrite my essay。
