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TOPIC
It is sometimes said that all students should be able to enter museums for free. Do you agree with this opinion?

回答
I think that all students should be able to enter museums for free. I have two reasons to support my opinion. The first reason is that there are artworks in museums. They are good for the education. The second reason is that students who do not get pocket money can go there. It is good for the experience and students may be interested. In conclusion , I strongly believe that all students should be able to enter museums for free
because of the reasons I have mentioned above.

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Answer 1

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professional

英検二級が求めているラインには達していると思います。

I think that all students should be allowed to enter museums for nothing.
Students today do not receive sufficient education in art.Indeed, the emergence of famous painters is no longer common, partly because art is not properly taught in schools.
Museums should also be accessible for school education.
In addition, museum tickets are too expensive for students.Students are reluctant to spend much money, which they earned through hard work at a part-time job, for something, let alone for museums.Nevertheless, museums are willing to exploit them.
Every museum ought to let students in for free lest it kill painters in the future or undermine their efforts.

同じようにstrong beliefに基づいたstrong argumentを作りました。

Answer 2

Kevin

interested inじゃないのかなと思いました