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【QUESTION】
Some people say that young people today
are not kind enough to elderly people.
What do you think about that?

Date
I don't think that young people today are not kind enough
To elderly people.
I have two reasons to support my opinion.
First, the number of elderly people in Japan is increasing
year by year, so young people are become more careful.
Many young people help elderly people who are in need
of help.
Second,
Young people are polite, so young people are
respectfully involved with elderly people.
In conclusion, I think that young peple these days are
kind enough to elderly people.
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Answer 1

✨ 最佳解答 ✨

ジンくん

どうでしょうか

ジンくん

具体的事例を入れた方が説得力は増します。

yyy

ありがとうございます！