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In my opinion, people should
not trist information on the
Internet. I have two reasons
to support this based on
news and socil media, In
the first place, Internet news
may contain fake news. I don't
know whether information is true
because it don't have evidence.
However, many people don't know
it and believe it. It
is very dangerous In the
second
place, many people post
take information on social media,
and people who belive it twe
pout it, too. It's bad a
cycle / Therefore, I think people
should be careful about I
Internet Intamation.

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.Write an essay on the given TOPIC.
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•Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer.
• Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion
• Suggested length: 120-150 words
• Write your essay in the space provided on Side B of you
answer sheet.
Any writing outside the space will not be graded.
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