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• Write an essay on the given TOPIC.
• Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer.
4
• Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion
• Suggested length: 120-150 words
• Write your essay in the space provided on Side B of yo
answer sheet.
Any writing outside the space will not be graded.
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TOPIC
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Is it beneficial for workers to change jobs often? of yliutenso netale
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POINTS
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Career goals
Motivation
• The economy
Working conditions
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I Yes, it is. I agree that it is beneficial for workers to change job often because
you can get many experience and motivation to change job. I
First, you can work many jobs. For example, you can be a police man and
doctor and so on. They have different idea. So, talking to them,
you can get a new view.
Second, you can get motivation for a job. In the office, there are
many people who have pation. It is important to talk to them.
You can get good impact.
For these reasons, I agree this topic.
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I want to work at many places in the future. And I want to spend
good time.
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