✨ 最佳解答 ✨
Hello everyone, I'm XXX, and you can just call me Hannah.
(補一些詞提升流暢度)
I'm generally a quiet person, but I'm actually quite friendly and open to having a chat.
(原本的表達不是很自然，改成這樣)
"The most important thing......"
(不太懂你這句的意思，你用中文解釋一下，為什麼特別說最重要的事? the rules of council是指什麼?)
Now, let me share something that gets me really excited — K-pop! I absolutely love it and can get a little crazy about it.
(增加流暢度，那個"—" 講的時候要類似逗號停頓一下)
So, why do I want to be the vice president? Well, as I was growing up, some people thought I was just "decent at academics and not good at public speaking."
(增加流暢度，你所謂的speech是指"演講"(public speaking)、還是"不善表達"?)
But deep down, I've always had dreams of being seen and recognized.
(being seen一般使用上比較少用在你想表達的較抽象"被看見"的意思，用recognized會更明確，這裡甚至可以拿掉seen)
By becoming the vice president of the club, I hope to show that I have more abilities beyond academics that are important in life.
(can prove有點奇怪，偏中式英語，應該用show/demonstrate，後面也有改寫，academics的s記得要念好，漏掉會變形容詞)
這裡感覺缺少了一點結尾，這要看你所謂的面試是公開面向群眾還是面對面試官?
3.你確定"聯合國會議的議式規則"是用"the rules of the council"嗎? 這是你們社團採用的詞彙嗎?
議事規則就我的理解該用parliamentary procedures，聯合國會議要用(MUN) conference
This semester, I've gained valuable insights into the workings of the council(可能要改成conference?), even though I must admit, remembering all the rules hasn't been the easiest task for me!
4. On a personal note, I'm a huge fan of K-pop. I absolutely love it and can get a little crazy about it.
(改一下起承轉合，比較順暢)
5. Now, let me explain why I wish to become the vice president of this club.
Growing up, I gave off the impression that I was only decent in terms of academic performance, but not so great at expressing myself.
(一樣改一下)
8. Thank you for listening, and I'm truly excited about the opportunity to contribute to this club as vice president.
(結尾)
我有盡量簡化不用太難的字...太難要說哦，太超出程度沒好處
謝謝你的幫忙！☺️
謝謝你的回覆！🥰
✔️你寫的第三點我是想表達「我這學期在社團中學到最重要的知識就是聯合國會議的議式規則」
✔️第五點是「不善表達」的意思
✔️這是對著一位面試官面試，結尾該怎麼寫比較好呢？
再次感謝🌹