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I like this story! They are great family! Irene has
grown up to get a little roles on the stage. I felt
happy because Irene didn't give up her dream. Irene's
mother didn't become an actress, but her daughter
came ture one's dream. It makes me feel like happy.
It was easy for me to read this story. This is why
I want to read this story again. I'm sure that almost
people will be happy to read this story.