Question

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TOPIK
Do you think children should have homework during summer vacation.

ANSER
I do not agree with this opineon. I have two reasons to support my case. The first reason is for children's happiness. If we imposing many homework to children, they can't do what they want to do, and maybe it will hinder their future dream. In fact, I was. I wanted to be a writer, but I didn't have time to learn about writer because of many homework. The second reason is for teacher. If children do many homework, teacher's workload will be very hard, and teacher can't rest in calum. Homework rab our free time, so we should disapear it. For these reasons stated above, I think children should not have homework during summer vacation.