Question

candy

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Yesterday，I want to my friends house take subway，when I was reading book.
A woman got on，and she was pregnant，so I stand up and gave my seat to a woman，she sat down，and simle, thanks to my great heart .
I felt shame. I loved to help people.
because it was let's me joyful.
I hope this world became better.

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全民英語能力分級檢定測驗
Writing Proficiency Test
第二部份:段落寫作
題目:昨天我搭捷運要去朋友家。當我正在看書時,有一位孕婦上了軍。我於是馬上起身把座位
讓給她。她坐了下來並且微笑地跟我道謝。我對自己的行為感到很驕傲。請依照下面的圖
片,寫一篇約50字的故事。注意:未依提示作答者,將予扣分。
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Answer 1

LKX

我覺得時態儘量一致比較好 還有你有是想打shy吧而不是shame

LKX

對了 還有去的過去式是went

LKX

I went to my friends’ house by taking subway

candy

好的，謝謝