Question

candy

如下文法有錯，請告訴我🙏🙏🙏
Last week on Sunday，Mark  went to amusement park with his friends.
They went to stand a line the roller coaster right away. The roller coaster
was  exciting. When the roller coaster was end.
At the same time, Mark felt dizzy. His friends was worry about him. Let's Mark rest short time.

GEPT全民英語能力分級檢定測驗
Writing Proficiency Test
第二部份:段落寫作
題目:上個星期天,馬克和他的朋友到一座樂園玩。他們馬上就去排隊搭乘雲霄飛車。雲霄飛
車十分刺激,只不過馬克一下來就感到頭量目眩。請依照下面的圖片,寫一篇約50字的
故事。注意:未依提示作答者,將予扣分。
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Answer 1

可

你是上禮拜天 應該會用last sunday吧

candy

最後一句忘記打字上去了😅
Then,they went to play else amusement together.
請問這個句子，文法有錯嗎？

Answer 2

Lulala ʘ‿ʘ

最後一句是否應改為：His friends were worried about him, and let Mark rest for a short time.🤔

candy

謝謝你，再請問一下
最後一句忘記打字上去了😅
Then,they went to play else amusement together.
請問這個句子，文法有錯嗎？

Lulala ʘ‿ʘ

可以改為：Then,they went to play else (或other) amusement equipment together.😁

candy

謝謝✧