Question

candy

幫我看一下文法，哪裡需要修改❓
This afternoon Alice go to department store with her daughter.
At first ,they go to clothe store ，Alice is buying her clothes ,and her daughter is bored , she look at toy store, she is very excited and go to play toys, Alice pay money for clothes.
suddenly she find her daughter is missing.
she is nervous ,Finally a poilce officer take her daughter return the clothes store.

Answer 1

學渣渣HY

看上去應該就是時態問題吧。因為是this afternoon，已成過去式。