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Bella

各位好，想問一下我這樣寫有沒有文法上的錯誤或是哪裡很奇怪可以改正的？我要講一分鐘的口試～題目是 Why people from another country should visit Taiwan？

First, Taiwan's crime levels are on par with Japan and
violent crime is extraordinarily low, Crime rates are less
than half than that of the U.S., Australia, Canada, or the
U.K!
Second, Taiwan is justifiably one of the best food
destinations in the world. There are many must-try
Taiwanese foods, including Taiwanese hotpot, beef
noodle soup, bubble tea, and the infamous “stinky tofu”.
You can find amazing food at small family Taiwanese
restaurants, and food in general is very affordable.
The least but not the last, Taiwan has the world's
friendliest people.
According to Expat Insider, Taiwan was rated 1st out of
64 countries in the Expat Insider 2019 World Survey, and
the friendliest country in Asia.

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黃富

我不知道妳要用這個自我介紹幹嘛但是我可以很肯定會被英文好一點的面試官打槍⋯⋯太多不合理和文法錯誤 有些句子甚至讓人看不懂 不過我幫妳打好一篇大致上都是妳想表達的東西 而且應該差不多一分鐘 妳可以參考看看 有什麼問題都可以再問我～

If you ask me what country is worth visiting, I will definitely suggest Taiwan.
Firstly, the crime statistics in Taiwan is on par with Japan, whose social order is wonderful. That is to say, Taiwan is officially secure.
In the second place, Taiwan is really the best destination for exotic cuisines in the world. There are numerous exotic refreshments including hotpot, beef soup, bubble tea, and the classic one “stinky tofu ”. You can find those snacks in ordinary restaurants whose foods are affordable but delicious.
Last but not least, people in Taiwan are always amiable and friendly. According to the Expat Insider, our country was recognized as the friendliest country in Asia, defeating the other 64 countries.

Bella

不是自我介紹啦🤣
是下禮拜期末考要講的口試
謝謝你的回答！我果然還是太爛了哈哈哈

黃富

大學生活真有趣 妳是什麼大學啊？

Bella

我是淡江ㄉ～

黃富

原來如此 我是一個…努力撐過防疫無聊暑假的準大一😂 當時的妳應該在環島？？還是環世界