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1. the loss* of the* natural habitats and ecosystems.
ecosystems 不太用loss 來描述,改用destruction等字
不用the 後面已經是複數名詞了,加上the會變成指特定某個你知我知的那些
這句與上一句之間的連接不是很好
這句應該是列舉上一句提到的many environmental problems/issues/challenges.
比較好的寫法會是
One example of them is the destruction of natural habitats and ecosystems brought about by excessive deforestation and urbanization
2. "We must take these problems seriously."
3. 第一段句結尾句,感覺跟你主題句是衝突的...
such 的語意是 像這樣子的... 用在這裡有點怪
我認為改these 會比較好
4. 第二段第一句用while開頭表雖然,這是從屬子句
....problems "," as consumers, we should...
5. "in" our daily lives
6. driving cars* 有一點廢話...
可以改接 driving to school or work.
7. "," and we can rely more on...
這邊建議改成逗號的寫法
句號是符合文法的,但用在這裡不適合
初學者不建議用and, but, so 開始句子。
7. In this way後面是要接其結果
但你後面的句子不適合
這邊可以改放
"After all", it takes a "collaborative" effort "from" the government...
8. for future "generations"