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想請問大家此篇還有沒有需要改進的地方

vith. meet you. ive Both the government and individuals have their respective roles to play in protecting the environment. In recent decades , many environmental problems have emerged as a result of human activity. Excessive deforestation and urbanization have brought about the loss of the natural habitats and ecosystems. We must seriously take these problems. Nonetheless, these problems are too big for individuals to deal with.ls As a result, it is the government's duty to solve such problems. But, then While the government plays a vital role in tackling the environmental problems. As consumers, we should go green on our daily lives. For example, we can take public transportation rather than driving cars. And we can rely more on renewable energy to reduce carbon emission. In this way, it will take a collabrotive effort by the government and individauls to make the world a better place for future generation.
1 TENSOOLID 近幾十年來,環境問題已經成為全球 關注的議題。無論是對政府或對個人來 說,保護環境都刻不容緩。請以此為題, 寫一篇英文作文,文長至少120 個單詞 (words jo文分兩段,第一段說明哪些環 境問題是需要政府出面著手處理的,第二 段則說明個人可以採取什麼行動來保護環 境。 smurt to geusoed trollullog is zuohee boot | costusn vem to al pe ed al eens ad 動動腦 利用 2W (Why + Wha 为石 Why should everyone protect the environment?
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1. the loss* of the* natural habitats and ecosystems.
ecosystems 不太用loss 來描述,改用destruction等字
不用the 後面已經是複數名詞了,加上the會變成指特定某個你知我知的那些

這句與上一句之間的連接不是很好
這句應該是列舉上一句提到的many environmental problems/issues/challenges.
比較好的寫法會是
One example of them is the destruction of natural habitats and ecosystems brought about by excessive deforestation and urbanization

2. "We must take these problems seriously."

3. 第一段句結尾句,感覺跟你主題句是衝突的...
such 的語意是 像這樣子的... 用在這裡有點怪
我認為改these 會比較好

4. 第二段第一句用while開頭表雖然,這是從屬子句
....problems "," as consumers, we should...

5. "in" our daily lives

6. driving cars* 有一點廢話...
可以改接 driving to school or work.

7. "," and we can rely more on...
這邊建議改成逗號的寫法
句號是符合文法的,但用在這裡不適合
初學者不建議用and, but, so 開始句子。

7. In this way後面是要接其結果
但你後面的句子不適合
這邊可以改放
"After all", it takes a "collaborative" effort "from" the government...

8. for future "generations"

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