Question

慕欱

有沒有人能幫我看看有沒有文法錯誤（英文的閱讀總結）
My Summarize:
A villager who plant sugarcanes one day find out that the crops were missing. So he decided to stay awake to find out what happened.
When the night falls he found out a tiny speck. It move close to the farmer house and the farmer found out that it was a flying elephant. He get close to the crops and wait until the elephant finish eating the sugarcanes. As soon as the elephant fly up to the sky he grab the it’s tail. Than the elephant and the farmer flies to the Indra’s paradise.At there he saw silver grass and lots of precious stones. When he came back from there he built a new house. The curious villagers want to know what happened so they ask the farmer’s wife. She told them what happened so that they became wealth.So the villagers lure the elephant and a chain of villagers grab each other‘s hands and flown up to the sky they’re talking to each other that’s what they would like to take back from the Indra’s Paradise and one of the villagers who grabs the elephant tail let go of his hands. So all of them fell down from the sky and when the Indra knows what happened it decide to plant sugarcanes in the paradise then the flying elephant never came back down anymore.