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妃菜乃

英検の英作文の添削お願いしたいです。

topic

agree or disagree

high school education in Japan needs to be improved

AI am a hegh schol student I alweys have Complain for seheol
So I think hogh schalcdecetion in Jopan heeds to be inpraved.
Moinly, gblalizotioa ond quolity of teaching.Fist,it is mete
onod mote beaoming globelizatioa. Joparcse studets study Exghsh
for obaut six yeals. .
Howerer most peaple cowot speak Englis.
「ink it des not nean to study. They shauld have an
oppotunity to comuRiacte in Ergisk. It lesds to imglove their
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four skils, tesdig. withig, bstecicg and gpeakicg. Also, it peeds
to implove quality d fecdaieg. If studects Conld vot wndesstond
「teders wold not here blty for tading. So, tordes shoald
pioctice
for teach studeats botore they becoire feaches
Thetetore, I think high scho education in Japan shonldt
inpiaved